Wednesday, September 28, 2005

There was a gal!!

This one..i wrote partially in a fest and partially today...so thats not one of those getting-bored-in-class-thereby-writing articles..And any resemblance to any character living(me in particular) is purely coincidental......

Once upon a time,there was a gal.............smart,decently beautiful,with one unforgettable surreptious smile,and best of all,she wasnt commited!!But the story does not start until he comes.....from one not-so-alien institution.He was not-so-handsome,moderately intelligent,overfriendly perhaps,somewhat smart,perhaps too smart for his ass!!So this average guy with everything but confidence near to average sees the girl and falls for her at the first time itself....it wasnt love at first sight,"i don't believe in anything like that" was wat he used to say but on second thoughts it was no less than that,making him reconsider his statement times and again!!!!!

Then one fine day....he gets her contacts and sends her messages...not direct ones but lets say by body gestures n via his so called friends....n she returns the emotions...probably just a misunderstanding on his behalf,just a wrong perception....but he had to try anycase..his testesterone provoking him to gather the guts to talk to her....and so does he........and the response he gets was decent...atleast good for starters!!!
And then...it all died out...somewhat from both the sides...him trying a miniscule bit and she....not even caring!!!Probably she thought it was being too much...but the dilemma that coiled in his mind extended a bit too much...'to try or not to,that was the question'.....
Would it be too much if he calls her up...what if he asks her out...would she reply with the same smile of hers....even a negation but the smile to cover it up....
But something was seriously wrong and he knew it...rather both of them did...and so it all ended...atleast it looks like it has....wish it wouldn't have!!!
But all he can do now is wish.....simply wish!!!!

4 Comments:

Blogger M&M said...

hummmmm....

9:58 AM  
Blogger @archie@ said...

Oye...did it really turn that senti???as they say bugs...I got carried away and flowed with my emotions....watsay??

8:53 PM  
Blogger @archie@ said...

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8:59 PM  
Blogger @archie@ said...

and ashu.....what was this sheepish hmmmmmmm....all about??

9:17 PM  

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