Tuesday, January 24, 2006

Death of a raindrop

The Gods pleased,
Heaven rejuvenates,
Breezes soothe,,
Life celebrates.

Clouds summit,
A rendezvous,
A glittery fiesta,
Tonight lets do.

Tonight lets groove,
And dance along,
To our own song.

Drops of passion,
Of joy, no dearth,
Of momentary life,
The newly attained birth.

She knows, for long,
Tis not gonna last,
It won't be long,
When she'd be past.

But after a while,
She starts loving,
The fraudulent life,
The air-bubble identity.

So much that,
She didn't want to die,
To travel more, with air,
She wanted to fly.

Unknown destination,
Some unexplored spot,
Meaningless journey,
No direction she got.

And death did come,
In another moment,
She died a painful death,
Away from her nearest.

Death of another drop,
With another birth,
Death of another life,
But the soul still attached to earth.

Break free.......


Blogger Sakshi said...

sweet... !!!

9:51 AM  
Blogger @archie@ said...

thanx sak!!

10:38 AM  
Blogger The Decayed Canine said...

I really havent read the poem. But Im pretty sure it must have had some deeper meaning than the quadruplets show it to have. Sorry, but I despise poetry, and archi is but that...

11:10 AM  
Blogger @archie@ said...

ahaaan...!!!i knew u despise archi...but dint kno ur that frustrated wid it....n deeper meanin?!!!maybe....
btw,was that supposed to be sarcasm??:?)D

4:29 AM  
Blogger Manju said...

This one ,s anothet of those good poems but plz try something othet than personification

11:52 PM  
Blogger Manju said...

Your best one"LIFE" fundo poem read that again and would always whensoever I open ur blog

11:53 PM  
Blogger @archie@ said...

thanx,i even wanna try somethin different...i will next time fr sure,n even i love "life"

8:37 AM  
Blogger Lyrical Craziness Personified said...

a very interesting thought
an equally interesting execution.

mebbe at places i would not agree with the words... but :)

made a nice read!!!

2:05 AM  

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